Good Afternoon,
I already checked your dialogue. Ther are a few things that you need to fix. Check the comments that I've made in the document (as attached). Since you need to do role-play based on your dialogue in Week 12, you need to provide the setting of place for your dialogue. I've mentioned that you need to write 10 exchanges of questions and answers based on the material given; that means you need to at least have 10 questions and 10 answers